The importance of reading litareture
The picture has showed the general problem in our life.The teacher teach us knowledge and skills,but they often ignore that reading literature is also important.
Nowadays students go to school for exams,so teachers teach them how to get good grades.Most of them are not emphasized to reading literature,because it is no useful to take exam.But in my opinions,it is essential to reading literature.For example,A spend all his time on study,so he has good grades.But B often reads literature during holiday.Compare A to B ,we can find that B would be more confident one ,and he will be more easier to get success than A.Because B knows how to get along with people and how to get a rest in busy life.
From now on,I think schools should pay more attention to reading literature.Literature is to us what water to fishes.It can enrich us.And When we are reading literature,we are reading our culture actually.To sum up,all of us shouldn’t ignore reading literature.
The importance of reading literature（1）
The picture has shown(2) the general problem in our life.The teacher teach us knowledge and skills,but they often ignore that reading literature is also important.
Nowadays students go to school mainly(3) for exams,and thus(4) teachers teach them how to get good grades.Most of them are not emphasized to reading literary works(5),because it is not(6) useful for taking exams(7).However,in my opinion,it is essential to reading literature.For example,A spend all his time on study,so he has good grades.In contrary(8),B often reads literature during holidays.Comparing(9) A to B ,we can find that B would be more confident than A(10),and he will be more easier to reach(11) success than A,Because B knows how to get along with people and how to get a rest in busy life.
From now on,I think teachers(12) should put more stress(13) on reading literature.Literature is to us what water to fish（14）.It can enrich our knowledge.And When we are reading litareture,we are learning(15) our culture actually.To sum up,all of us shouldn’t ignore reading literature.
A be more +adj +thanB句型,好好熟悉熟悉,以后大有用处.
get 换成reach 好点
2012年6月的四级409分 听力119 阅读162 综合42 作文86 我要怎样去加强,我想在12月的时候通过四级
I"m from a very beautiful city,ZhouShan,it beside the East China Sea.
If my foreign friend is coming to visit my hometown,I think he will love the city.I"ll take him to the Putuo Mountain,a great number of people come to the mountain to call on Buddhas every year.Zhujiajian is also a good place to visit.He can see the vast sea,fabulous fishermen paintings,and what"s more,delicious seafood,like crabs ,fishes,etc.All of them are very fresh,I think he will be fond of them.And maybe I"ll take him to the Haishan Park.It is a historic tourist attraction.There was a war between the government of the Qing Dynasty and the british government.In the other word ,it had seen the Opium Wars many years ago,and then people built the park to honor the dead soldiers.
He can eat delicious food,sea beautiful views and honor the history,it will be a funny tourist.
I come from a very beautiful city namely ZhouShan,it is located next to the East China Sea.I believe if any of my foreign friends visited this place,they would certainly fall in love with my hometown.There are few beautiful spots such as Zhuiiaiian and Putuo Mountain attract quite a number of people.Many followers to Putuo Mountain worship and pray for good health and good wealth for their families every year.Zhujiajian is also a good place to visit,despite of the great scenery and a vast expanse of blue sea,you may see fabulous fishermen are paintings along the sea shore and you may also taste variety of freshness seafood at here.Of course,not forgetting about the Haishan Park,a historical tourist spot which was ever witnessed a horrible war between the Qing Dynasty governor and British military.This is known as the battle field of the Opium Wars many years ago.There were thousand of souls and martyrs were sacrificed in the battle.In order to commemorate the veterans,the local government worked together with some associations raised a fund to build this Memorial Park to honor the courage of the dead soldiers.
In a simple word,I am sure whoever has been to ZhouShan will definitely agree with me that it is a beautiful city with all kinds of delicious seafood and it has a natural horizon as well as a fascinating scenery where all tourist should not be missed.
How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
Few days ago,i read the newspaper and found a essay that says the children nowadays are becoming more and more dependent,the reason for that may be a large part of parents do almost everything for their children,including earing,eating,moving and so on.
Everything has its two sides,so does this thing.On the one hand,with the help of their parents,children can do everything successfully and happily.This can add their confidence.On the other hand,these things would waste their parents" time,and with time go on,children can do nothing by themselves.
So the parents should help their children to be independent.Firstly,they can try not to do everything for their children.Secondly,they should also have their own time to work,and let their children to do their own thing by themselves.The last but not the least,parents can give their children more homework to do.
All in all,i can believe children will be independent finally with the things mentioned above.
如果不是你敲字的失误的话 首段就问题多多 a essay ；including earing,eating,moving ；且全句缺连词.
Everything has its two sides,so does this thing.这样的句子比较没含金量.
This can add their confidence.还有：with the things mentioned above.这些句子都有毛病
顶楼上的 楼主词汇量和句型都有很大的进步空间 加油~
请指正英语作文Spring Festival Gala on CCTV
Spring Festival Gala on CCTV (2006年12月 四级真题）
Spring Festival Gala on CCTV
With the development of science and technology ,more and more galas come to our life ,one of which is the spring festival gala on CCTT——a large number Chinese watch on Spring Festival Eve.
Recently ,the argument of whether or not to remain the spring festival gala on CCTV has brought to public focus and debate .Some body hold the idea that Spring Festival Gala do not go on ,and the reason as follow :firstly and the most importantly ,the performance can’t satisfy the desire of people which come from different areas ,races and cultures .Then the gala spend too much time and money..
As far as I am concerned,whether it is good or not depends on how we look at it .In my opinion ,just as the water is to fish,so is gala on CCTV to Spring Festival ,the gala has get into the life ,and the Spring Festival Gala should be go on.
1.With the development of science and technology ,more and more galas come to our life ,one of which is the spring festival gala on CCTT
开头这一段是虽然是模板里的套话,但也要写的有点新意,科学和技术的发展和 Gala没有必然的联系 Lz你这是把套话硬套在这篇作文的开头了,真正的四级考官看了只会厌烦!
since the dawn（黎明） of 21st century,various of galas have been a symbol of the modernization and civilization（文明化） in a number of countries.for example,the Spring Festival Gala on CCTV,and surely it has the potential to bring about a great deal of advances.
2.作文第一条就有要求,.许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节晚会.这一点你写了么?很明显你没写,这就是严重的漏题!可能你一时没想到这个论点能写到什么,所以避重就轻直接提到后面的negative方面,你省掉了positive方面,那么很好,作为考官我也可以给你减个20分,总共要写1 2 3 点 你省一个我减20分不为过吧?
as the parts above I said ,some people like it ,in my opinion,because Spring Festival Gala on CCTV provides a platform for people to get together and enjoy their family -life,for instance,every year,my family and I always enjoy the gorgeous（华丽的） clothes and wonderful sing and dance performance,they free us from the grind of daily routine(日常琐事).
nevertheless,Some body hold the idea that Spring Festival Gala do not go on ,and the reason as follow :firstly and the most importantly ,the performance can’t satisfy the desire of people which come from different areas ,races and cultures .Then the gala spend too much time and money.（这一段基本写的还可以,只是那个firstly and the most importantly ,我看的要吐了,是人都用个这么东西,太常见了,用foremost也好一点）
其次 论点要充分 想不到就来个 for example 至少能扯几十个单词
最好 祝四六级顺利 早考早甩掉这个包袱!
作文一般,快速阅读好像是全对,要么就错一个,听力选择题对11个或者12个,填单词对6个,句子随便写了点(不知道能不能酌情给分啊~= =+),选词填空4个,仔细阅读6个,完型15个,翻译 1个或者2个.【2012年6月英语四级作文】
On the Celebrity Spokesperson
Currently, we could hardly live a single day without seeing a celebrity spokesperson promoting a product or a social campaign on TV, net or other media. This is an intensely popular trend that we cannot fail to notice.
There is no doubt that the celebrity spokespeople could boost the sale of a product. A host of celebrity spokespersons, however, have emerged as the marketing tool of some companies, even companies producing and selling fake and inferior items. This kind of behavior has produced negative impacts on consumers and whole society, which should be severely criticized and penalized. Of course, as is known to all, everything has both bright and dark sides. Some stars’ endorsement of social activities and public campaigns raises public awareness, giving rise to changes in public behavior. In this case, they serve as positive role models of the general public. To name only one case: Pu CX, a household figure, acting as the celebrity spokesman of the China AIDS Foundation, contributes greatly to the cause of AIDS prevention and cure in China.
Over the past couple of years, a variety of talent shows have emerged on TV channels across the nation, from Super Girls to Happy Boys and so forth. This type of entertainment program is intensely popular, especially among young adults and has produced profound impacts on their studies and life.
There are a couple of reasons behind the tide. To start with, young folks need role models to learn from. So many of them are crazy for contestants participating in these programs. This gives rise to the increasing emergence of these shows because TV networks naturally need to cater to young audiences. Plus, thanks to economic and political reforms carried out by the government, this crop of young generation have more freedom and desire to express and showcase themselves. Therefore, a growing number of young people desire to get involved in these shows.
This is a divisive topic. On my personal level, the talent show is a superb means of relaxing and amusing and can hugely relieve our strains. As college students, however, we could not afford to indulge in them and should be aware of the utmost importance of studies.
On the Food Security
Over the past couple of years, several cases of the food scandal have been disclosed on various media. The problem of food security has become a hot button across society. The prevalence of food insecurity has greatly impacted public health, which the government could not afford to ignore, according to the online edition of the People Daily.
There are a couple of driving forces, I would argue, behind this undesirable tide. First, in the course of the rapid economic evolution, we ignore moral education, giving rise to the rising rate of the problem. More importantly, the lack of adequate regulation and punishment on those illegal producers enforces the trend.
As Confucius instructed, it is better late than never. Prompt and strict measures should be taken to turn back this evil trend. The government should launch a massive moral campaign to educate all citizens and draw up tougher laws to crack down on those irresponsible corporations and prohibit them from entering the food industry again. I am firmly convinced that through our combined efforts we are bound to enjoy more risk-free foods in the days ahead.
On Uncivilized Behaviors
We cannot fail to notice that countless uncivilized behaviors exist in our daily lives, such as spitting, talking loudly, littering, saying nasty words in public places and so forth. All these are bad manners that we should not lose sight of. As an ancient land enjoying a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years, China is witnessing a surge in improper acts that every Chinese citizen should feel ashamed of. Uncivilized behaviors by a host of Chinese both at home and abroad have seriously affected China’s image, according to an editorial posted on People Daily’s official website.
As Chinese, we should not get offended when others point out our weaknesses but should focus more attention on improving ourselves. We should strive to identify the causes of those improper behaviors and find ways to eliminate them. There are a host of causes, I would argue, behind this trend. To name only one: the lack of moral education. The government should wage a massive moral campaign to fight against this trend and we ourselves should endeavor to behave decently in our daily lives. As college students of the new age, we should take the leading role.
On Cultivating the Sense of Gratitude
On college campuses across the nation, there is a noticeable phenomenon that we cannot afford to ignore: far too many young college students lack the sense of gratitude, one of the countless traditional virtues of this ancient land with a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years. These young adults were not and are not aware of the huge importance of expressing gratitude to those who once helped them, from teachers to parents and so forth.
Personally, I deem that the root cause of students without a graceful heart is that they receive an education not valuing the moral sphere. I strongly believe that joint efforts from folks across society are the final remedy for this social headache. As young university students of the new era, we should make our own contributions to this cause. Imagine a world without the sense of gratitude. This kind of world is doomed to failure. Simply put, we should join our hands to heighten our awareness of fostering a graceful heart. Only in this way can we build our society into a harmonious one. My fellow students, I beg you to act from now on.
On Credit Card
At present, a wide vareity of credit cards issued by major banks and shopping malls are thriving in colleges and universities across the nation, with a multitude of college students making up a growing population of card holders. Indeed, one out of five students is estimated to be in possession of at least one credit card, and the figure is expected to be on the steady increse, the latest data published by Yangtze Evening Post suggests.
Like anything prior to the emergence of this small piece of plastic, the increasing popularity of credit card on campus has both bright and dark sides. On the one hand, young adults in college, free from the trouble of pocketing a considerable sum of cash, could enjoy the convenience of credit cards and purchase expensive goods by installments. On the other hand, however, the irresponsible and excessive use of the cards by these youngsters, the majority of whom are fresh out of middle school incapable of budgeting their money, can make them heavily in debt which will take them years to pay off.
On my personal level, while enjoying a host of conveniences the credit card may bring, we couldn’t afford to ignore a conspicious fact: in most cases, parents are our sole financial sources.Instead of spending without any restrict, we are supposed to put studies on the top of our agenda and move ourselves beyond heavy dependence upon our parents